Print product pitch feedback

I sent the link to my potential target audience and asked for feedback. This is what was said:

Feedback

1. Each sketch is labeled well and also has a image to show what you are talking about while referring to a real media product.
2. Your media products look conventional
3. You are very clear on themes, colours and costumes
4. The images used show clear understanding of what you want your print products to look like and also how it relates to real ones
5. The colour scheme and themes match really well with the song. It represents the vulnerability that people feel in winter and how the artist feels in the song.

Font choices: 1: 5 votes
2:0  votes
3:0 votes
4:0 votes
5:0 votes

The first font was voted the best. although I have designed my own font, the font number 1 that the audience liked is quite close to the one I made myself.